Talk:Souls of Utopia/@comment-27713368-20160911233032/@comment-28695713-20160912025327

Hey granny!

ILY you to death, but your RP example is a bit off.

Here's the basic translation.

Description: Wy'tch is a charitable, generous, grotesque, big giant who is concealed under the earth's surface (?).

Attack: She advanced, lethally latched death-causing, (convulted isn't a word, perhaps you meant convoluted which means complicated) blurry veins with her leg bone, blood flowing while ravaging capable of being retracted (the definition of retractile) with neck, wrenching, her zygomatic arch (jaw, and it's anat) locked, clenching while facial expressions vanished.

Basically, she attacked, latched blurry veins (which isn't possible) with a bone in her leg, causing blood to flow while she ravaged retractile (retractile is an adjective meaning capable of being retracted) with her neck, twisting, her jaw locked while blah blah blah.

The inaccurate terms are: subterranean, convulted, retractile, and tibia. Your grammar was also off, and you failed to add a noun after "latched", therefore making the sentence say: Lethally latched blurry veins.

ok i gtg now but really fix it ily!